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Please check and correct all my notes, if you agree, according my suggestions.
Line 5: Please explain with full name the novel COVID-19 virus, according the International Classification of Diseases (ICD) with name “severe acute respiratory syndrome coronavirus 2 (SARS-CoV-2) in its first order of appearance. After that you may used the abbreviated name Covid-19.
Line 8: Please explain the used abbreviation UAE with its first name of appearance. After that you may use the abbreviated name UAE.
Line 10: Please abbreviate Primary health care centers (PHCC) in its first use, and after that in line 16 you may used the abbreviated name for it: “The PHCC response to the COVID-19 pandemic is critical to identify…” You may abbreviate it in line 4 in part introduction, which is better.
Please provide 4-6 key words after conclusion part of the abstract:
Line 23: Please explain the abbreviation Sars-Cov-2 with its full name (severe acute respiratory sybdrome coronavirus 2) in its first order of appearance, independently from the explanation in the abstract.
Line 24: You need to explain the used abbreviation WHO with its full name (World Health Organization). After that you may use the abbreviated name WHO.
Line 25: Please cite a reference before full stop in the end of the sentence “…it as pandemic on March 11 2020 (1, 2).” Please divide with comma the numbers of the cited reference in the bracked. Please check this everywhere in the text. Please check the space between bracket: “testing program(2).”
Line 28: Please abbreviate “Primary health care centers” with PHCC in its first order of appearance. In line 40 you abbreviate it with PHP. Please choose appropriate abbreviation.
Line 34: PHC is abbreviation what you not mentioned before. If you mean on PHCC, it have to be explained before, when it’s mentioned for the first time. You use a different abbreviation for it in line 40 (PHP). Please check all used abbreviations and their full names in the text.
Line 44: You repeated the date of WHO declaration (11th March 2020). You mentioned the same before, line 25. Please delete one of them.
Line 46: Somewhere you write “COVID-19”, and somewhere “Covid19”. Please equate that. Please check for it everywhere.
Line 49 and line 40: Please check the use of abbreviation for primary health care physicians (PHP). You was used before (line 40), and now you explain its full name. You have to do that before, in its first order of appearance.
Line 55: Please explain the used abbreviation RT-PCR with its full name in its first order of appearance. After that you may use its full name.
Line 60: Please explain briefly in the bracket what mean H and N letter [The “H” (hemagglutinin) and the “N” (neuraminidases) are both proteins that are found on the outer shell or envelope of the virus] in H1N1.
Line 77: You not need to explain with full name the abbreviation PHC, what you have to explain before, in its first order of appearance.
Line 87: What about the used abbreviation PCP? You never mentioned before, and now, you not had provided a full name explanation for it.
Line 89: Please provide a version of used statistical software (Excel for Windows 10?) and appropriate citation for the SPSS and its version:
IBM Corp. Released 2017. IBM SPSS Statistics for Windows, Version 25.0. Armonk, NY: IBM Corp.
You have to know the year of the production and Version for SPSS.
Line 89: “Suitable test and applications were run to analyze…”
It is not enough and acceptable explanation for the statistical methods used in obtaining the results in a scientific paper. You have to provide the used statistical methods (Regression analysis, the way of presentation of the results: mean, median…numbers, percents…
Line 103: Please explain the used abbreviation DM with its full name Diabetes mellitus. Is it type 2 or type 1 diabetes?
Line 104: Please explain the used abbreviation COPD with its full name Chronic Obstructive Pulmonary Disease.
Line 105: Please correct SPO2 to sPO2 and provide the full name for it (Spot oxygen saturation).
“Vital assessed included Spot oxygen saturation (sPO2) 47.9%…”.
Please provide explanations of the others used abbreviations: FBC, CRP, CXR…
Line 112: Do not repeat the explanation of before explained abbreviation (SOB), HTN, COPD…Please check them everywhere. Explain them in their first order of appearance, and do not repeat if you was explained before.
Line 146: Now you may use the abbreviate name PHCC for primary health care centers.
Line 171: You do not mention interleukin – 6? Cytokines are an essential part of the inflammatory process. Please describe briefly something about it and the cytokine storm.
Table 2: The result for body temperature in the bracket is missing.

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