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This was the assignment that was drafted, I know need assistance with the final
This was the assignment that was drafted, I know need assistance with the final draft.
Please edit and make corrections on the attached essay to avoid AI-generated tracker issues and make corrections on professor’s review.
Draft assignment:
Write your Health Science evaluation essay.
What is an evaluation?
Evaluation essays are, in essence, reviews. They pass judgment on whether something is good or bad, better or worse than something comparable, and how so.
For Health Science, write an essay that evaluates a health-related service, app, or place (for example, a healthy food delivery service, an app to track exercise, or your local gym).
Use 3-5 criteria to develop the evaluation.
Judge how the service, app, or place meets that criteria.
Offer evidence to support that judgment.The evaluation essay gives a writer more practice with the concept of the “I” as researcher, as well as gives the opportunity to gain experience conducting field research. Because this evaluation essay requires that the writer take and incorporate three relevant photographs, it also encourages the communication theory of multimodality (the use of media to create a text). Additionally, this essay continues to give the student writer an opportunity to further practice the recursive writing process (planning, drafting, revising, etc.) and gain a better understanding of the overall basic essay format (introduction, body paragraphs, conclusion) and essay development.
Finally, consider the value of crafting evaluations in the workplace. For example, employees are often asked to complete self-evaluations as part of completing a performance review.
DRAFT IS ATTCHMENT
Professors response on draft:
Denise, here are my reflections and recommendations:
The draft’s format is not in full MLA style. Visit module unit 1.3 to learn more about the essay formatting. Double-space all essays, provide the correct heading on page one (top-left with all appropriate elements), and provide the correct headers in top-right of every page.
Make sure that the essay meets the 750 word minimum per the instructions.
Friendly reminder to all students: Don’t use “you” or “your” (e.g., second person) or contractions (e.g., can’t… use cannot) unless you’re quoting someone else using those words.
Intro: It’s good. I really like the angle you’ve taken. Your hook and thesis are solid.
Body Paragraphs: Great examples with supporting details. Some of it was quite poetic. Friendly reminder: Narrative essays require more sensory details in your body paragraphs. Evoke the human senses via sensory details such as “I could taste success although it seemed nowhere in sight” or “I felt determination creep into my soul.”
Conclusion: I really like it. It brings effective closing to your previously presented ideas and viewpoints.
Friendly reminder: Make sure that the essay was not generated using AI tools. Even if a student opts to accept all recommended changes in an AI app, it will still generate a plagiarism report that I can review.
You have the potential to be a great writer. I can’t wait to read more.
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